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=FuzzyYak Apr 10, 2009, 1:07:07 AM
Really good shot. I like the composition and the reflections and you've composed the shot really well. The fruit is laid out well and the reflection in the mirror gives us additional angles that wouldn't have been visible on a normal, white surface. Kudos for that!

I do think, however, that the colors are a bit too warm/yellow. For a product shot I would have liked to see more blues and maybe a bit higher key (brighter) to make the fruit look fresher and the environment airier. The yellow tones don't give me that feeling.

All 'n all I think it's a great shot and with a few tweaks, it could be fantastic!
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`Misantropia Apr 10, 2009, 3:00:41 AM
Boa saturação das cores.
Deliciosa.

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*LostImages Apr 10, 2009, 10:42:05 AM
Tudo o que envolva morangos é algo delicioso. :D

Obrigado pelo comentário e pela visita. :)

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~sassymolassy Apr 10, 2009, 1:53:31 PM
gosto bastante das cores:) muito bom e do close up,

quem em dera poder ter essa cena de critica, era bem fixe:D

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*LostImages Apr 10, 2009, 2:18:09 PM
Mais do que as cores, o que gosto mesmo é dos morangos.. :D E ainda agora acabei de comer alguns com chantilly. :D

Não tens mas podes sempre deixar a tua critica por aqui. ;)

Obrigado pela visita e pelo comentário.

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• Emerson Barbosa •
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*eyenoticed Apr 10, 2009, 5:38:12 PM
This photo draws me in. I love it!

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*LostImages Apr 10, 2009, 11:44:56 PM
Thank you. :bow:

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• Emerson Barbosa •
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~Vinyariel Apr 11, 2009, 2:42:41 AM
yummy - looks very tasty!!!!!!!!!

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*LostImages Apr 11, 2009, 2:52:39 AM
Yes, they were. :D

Thank you for the visit and comment.

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• Emerson Barbosa •
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Mood: Love ~kazorm Apr 11, 2009, 6:27:06 AM
This is such a focused photo. The reflection is the first thing that captures your eye and then you see all the fine detail in the picture. I keep you looking at it longer. Great picture!!

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*LostImages Apr 11, 2009, 11:40:21 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comment.. I appreciate it. :)

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